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Post by Killa on Dec 12, 2007 12:24:10 GMT -6
Okay... I posted this before and apparently it didn't work, so I'll post again! Basically, I need some more ideas for my new story (When I finish Fallen Angel) , Evelyn. I won't give too much away in case anyone wants to read it. It's gonna be rated about a 15 (not sure yet) and basically it's about vampires. The main character (Scarlett) is going to be the last remaining 'Evelyn vampire ' which is like a royal bloodline, and most of the vampires think they're extinct, apart from a few vampires from a different clan ( Who are evil) and they want to kill Scarlett, so that their clan (who are the next best thing) can take over the vampire realm, and rule all the vampires. I need more storylines, any suggestions are welcome! It's going to include werewolves and witches etc aswell (Any magical creature you can think of) , romance, and mature themes Yeah, so let me know if it's a good idea, and any storylines you might have! Killa xx
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Post by Killa on Dec 23, 2007 5:37:06 GMT -6
I've changed the idea so that the dad is actually a werewolf, cos that would make more sense in my prologue and that would be the reason why Scarlett is hunted down by the other vampires xD Anybody have any opinions at all ?
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Post by *Smilie* on Dec 27, 2007 14:12:33 GMT -6
Hmm what If like she fell in love with a mortal or something... but she knows that she cant be with him... Sorry, I'm not good at fantasy stories
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Post by dragongirl on Dec 28, 2007 10:30:38 GMT -6
Scarlett can somehow meet a vampire of her age that is from the other clan. She doesn't know it and falls in love with him. He doesn't know she is from the enemies too. They are both friends and in love with each other and their opposite clans hunt them both down. The boy ends up locked in a dungeon and the girl with her powers must save him with all her strength. TA DAA ! I hope I helped
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Post by Killa on Dec 28, 2007 11:19:15 GMT -6
ZOMGZOMGZOMG No way! That is WAY too creepy! One of the storylines that I thought of originally was her to fall in love with one of the members of the other clan and they run away together and then get captured which leads up to the exciting and action packed last chapter!! *Eyes Dragongirl* Well... great minds think alike! And that's a good idea Smilie, but she's already got someone to fall in love with. And just to be clear, Scarlett doesn't actually know she's an Evelyn. It should be up on the exchange by tomorrow! Check out the website : www.freewebs.com/evelynsims2
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Post by dragongirl on Dec 28, 2007 11:30:21 GMT -6
I did and signed your guest book And do you say MY idea is creepy ? :6
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Post by Killa on Dec 28, 2007 13:09:04 GMT -6
It's creepy cos I thought of the exact same thing xD
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Post by Killa on Dec 28, 2007 14:46:20 GMT -6
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Post by dragongirl on Dec 29, 2007 7:39:35 GMT -6
I am deifnately going to read it
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Post by Brighty on Dec 29, 2007 14:21:23 GMT -6
I read it last night, it's really good! I can't wait for the next chapter
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Post by dragongirl on Dec 29, 2007 14:53:29 GMT -6
Me neither !
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Post by Killa on Jan 1, 2008 14:32:17 GMT -6
Hahaha thanks guys!
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Post by dragongirl on Jan 2, 2008 10:03:07 GMT -6
you should make the next fast ! I am suspending !
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Post by Killa on Jan 7, 2008 15:20:20 GMT -6
Hey, does anyone wanna help me out by proofreading chapter two? I already have one proofreader so it doesn't really matter if you don't, but the more the merrier I always say! It would be done over email.... so yeah xD Chapter Two isn't finished by far but I'd like to get proofreaders organised so I can send it out early and get it out on the exchange ASAP.. I'd credit you of course xD
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Post by dragongirl on Jan 7, 2008 15:26:35 GMT -6
I can be a proffreader
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